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SnitchyRosy @SnitchRose
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On the way to the castle, Peeves was playing pranks again. Honestly, I really hate that Peeves.
Not joking, he was really really disgusting and evil and vile and bad! I just hate him.
We finally arrived. What a great thing it is! I love Hogwarts! The decoration around the school were so warm and full of happiness. Perhaps it was because of the magic in the air. I can feel it.
I glanced around the Great Hall, everything was so familiar and made me feel brilliant. I looked
at the table which the professor sat, I found a new face.
"Oh my God," Harry said depressedly.
"What happen?" Ron asked.
"Can you see that woman with a toad-like face? She's one of the commitee who was in the
hearing!"
That woman was obviously up to no good. She was smiling-- a smile that I hate. She wore a
pink outfit. How old was she? Pink, pink and pink?
"Let's sit down first," I said, still staring at that woman.
We waited for the opening speech. Harry and Ron sat on the opposite side of me. Of course,
George and Fred sat nest to me. It's quite weird to say "George and Fred" instead of "Fred and
George".
"Welcome back to Hogwarts!" Professor Dumbledore said joyfully. We all looked up. They
started the sorting ceremony. The nervous face made me think of the first year we arrived at
Hogwarts. But this year, something changed. The Sorting hat had a new song. Was it because of
You-Know Who?
It seemed like everyone knew what did the Sorting Hat mean. Ron gasped. I frowned, and he
just shrugged. What did you mean?
I think you know, you are the only one who know what I think, isn't it?
Ron told me by his eyes.
I don't think I'm that kind of clever. Don't overestimate me, Ron.
George, who sat next to me, scowled at us suspiciously.😉
Not joking, he was really really disgusting and evil and vile and bad! I just hate him.
We finally arrived. What a great thing it is! I love Hogwarts! The decoration around the school were so warm and full of happiness. Perhaps it was because of the magic in the air. I can feel it.
I glanced around the Great Hall, everything was so familiar and made me feel brilliant. I looked
at the table which the professor sat, I found a new face.
"Oh my God," Harry said depressedly.
"What happen?" Ron asked.
"Can you see that woman with a toad-like face? She's one of the commitee who was in the
hearing!"
That woman was obviously up to no good. She was smiling-- a smile that I hate. She wore a
pink outfit. How old was she? Pink, pink and pink?
"Let's sit down first," I said, still staring at that woman.
We waited for the opening speech. Harry and Ron sat on the opposite side of me. Of course,
George and Fred sat nest to me. It's quite weird to say "George and Fred" instead of "Fred and
George".
"Welcome back to Hogwarts!" Professor Dumbledore said joyfully. We all looked up. They
started the sorting ceremony. The nervous face made me think of the first year we arrived at
Hogwarts. But this year, something changed. The Sorting hat had a new song. Was it because of
You-Know Who?
It seemed like everyone knew what did the Sorting Hat mean. Ron gasped. I frowned, and he
just shrugged. What did you mean?
I think you know, you are the only one who know what I think, isn't it?
Ron told me by his eyes.
I don't think I'm that kind of clever. Don't overestimate me, Ron.
George, who sat next to me, scowled at us suspiciously.😉
SnitchyRosy @SnitchRose
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I blushed, turned around and concentrated on Professor's speech.
"As you know, Professor Moody is not going to teach in this school this academic year. I'm so happy to tell you that we've found a brilliant teacher! Ler's welcome Professor Dolores Umbridge," Professor Dumbledore said and clapped.
Professor Umbridge walked out from the table with a disgusting smile. I noticed that she was so tiny, even shorter than Ginny. I hope she was a good teacher. She suddenly clear her throat, and the applause stopped.
'I'm so glad that I recieved this job. You know, I do love children. I love standing on this stage since I can see loads of cute face staring at me!' she smiled widely. Honestly, I think she never ever enjoy standing on the stage.
'As everyone knows, I come from the Ministry of Magic. This is my pleasure to teach the best school in Europe. Undoubtedly, the teaching methods worked effectively,' she stopped,'in the past.'
There was a murmur in the Great Hall. Of course we disagreed with her!
'So, I'm going to change your teaching methods in a safe and efficient way. Hope you understand,' she smiled, back to her seat.
We clapped unwillingly again. I understood at once. The Ministry of Magic was going to rule Hogwarts.
Our feasts began. It was delicious. I forgot every single bad thing when I was eating. Harry and Ron ate a lot. Why were they so hungry? George just kept asking me did I want to have this have that. I shook my head gently. I'm not a child anymore.
Professor Dumbledore was on the stage again. I stopped drinking Pumpkin Juice.
'Here're some notices from Mr Filch. First, you are not allow to go out of your dormitory without any teachers' permission after midnight, even you owned an Invisibility cloaked,' he stared at Harry, Ron and I. We giggled.
After that, he was repeating the things I had heard for 4 times. Although I felt bored, I needed to listen because of my prefect badge.
Finally, the reminders were all be read. I lead the new Gryffindor's student to our dormitory. I explained everything Percy told me in my first year to them.
'OK, we are now in front of our dormitory. See, this is Fat Lady. You need to tell her the password and you can go in. This month's password is "Mandrakes". You'll learn this knid of plants in your second year.' I turned around, ready to say the password but someone pulled my brushy hair.
'Prefect, what does the school motto in Latin means?' a little boy asked.
'Oh yes. This is Draco dormiens nunquam titillandus . It means A Sleeping Dragon is Never to be Tickled,' I giggled. All the students were laughing. I'm just saying the truth, actually.
They got in. I was too tired.I sat on the sofa near the fireplace, resting.
'Hey, it's not that kind of difficult, isn't it?' Ron said.
'Of course it is not difficult to you! What have you done? Just walk around with the first year students?' I asked with fury.
'Fine,' Ron said with an evil smile. Just then, Harry came and joined us.
'Fred and George are selling things in the corridors,' he said.
'Oh ya, Weasleys' Wizard Wheezes,' Ron said.
I laughed.🤭🤭🤭🤭🤭
"As you know, Professor Moody is not going to teach in this school this academic year. I'm so happy to tell you that we've found a brilliant teacher! Ler's welcome Professor Dolores Umbridge," Professor Dumbledore said and clapped.
Professor Umbridge walked out from the table with a disgusting smile. I noticed that she was so tiny, even shorter than Ginny. I hope she was a good teacher. She suddenly clear her throat, and the applause stopped.
'I'm so glad that I recieved this job. You know, I do love children. I love standing on this stage since I can see loads of cute face staring at me!' she smiled widely. Honestly, I think she never ever enjoy standing on the stage.
'As everyone knows, I come from the Ministry of Magic. This is my pleasure to teach the best school in Europe. Undoubtedly, the teaching methods worked effectively,' she stopped,'in the past.'
There was a murmur in the Great Hall. Of course we disagreed with her!
'So, I'm going to change your teaching methods in a safe and efficient way. Hope you understand,' she smiled, back to her seat.
We clapped unwillingly again. I understood at once. The Ministry of Magic was going to rule Hogwarts.
Our feasts began. It was delicious. I forgot every single bad thing when I was eating. Harry and Ron ate a lot. Why were they so hungry? George just kept asking me did I want to have this have that. I shook my head gently. I'm not a child anymore.
Professor Dumbledore was on the stage again. I stopped drinking Pumpkin Juice.
'Here're some notices from Mr Filch. First, you are not allow to go out of your dormitory without any teachers' permission after midnight, even you owned an Invisibility cloaked,' he stared at Harry, Ron and I. We giggled.
After that, he was repeating the things I had heard for 4 times. Although I felt bored, I needed to listen because of my prefect badge.
Finally, the reminders were all be read. I lead the new Gryffindor's student to our dormitory. I explained everything Percy told me in my first year to them.
'OK, we are now in front of our dormitory. See, this is Fat Lady. You need to tell her the password and you can go in. This month's password is "Mandrakes". You'll learn this knid of plants in your second year.' I turned around, ready to say the password but someone pulled my brushy hair.
'Prefect, what does the school motto in Latin means?' a little boy asked.
'Oh yes. This is Draco dormiens nunquam titillandus . It means A Sleeping Dragon is Never to be Tickled,' I giggled. All the students were laughing. I'm just saying the truth, actually.
They got in. I was too tired.I sat on the sofa near the fireplace, resting.
'Hey, it's not that kind of difficult, isn't it?' Ron said.
'Of course it is not difficult to you! What have you done? Just walk around with the first year students?' I asked with fury.
'Fine,' Ron said with an evil smile. Just then, Harry came and joined us.
'Fred and George are selling things in the corridors,' he said.
'Oh ya, Weasleys' Wizard Wheezes,' Ron said.
I laughed.🤭🤭🤭🤭🤭
5419 @5419
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已回到霍格華茲, 三人組和雙子是分開活動的, 妙麗和喬治如何發展? 期待故事.
你抽空寫同人文, 已是難得, 我不應抱怨文章太短. sorry, 希望不會領你有太大壓力. 抱歉.
你抽空寫同人文, 已是難得, 我不應抱怨文章太短. sorry, 希望不會領你有太大壓力. 抱歉.
新知 @taverch
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Grammar is okay, but syntax could be better.
It is definitely a good trying that you write in English even though there are some grammatical errors. Since they do not cause any problems or barriers on comprehending, it is fine.
Good story, anyway.
It is definitely a good trying that you write in English even though there are some grammatical errors. Since they do not cause any problems or barriers on comprehending, it is fine.
Good story, anyway.
SnitchyRosy @SnitchRose
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I couldn't sleep all the night. I was staying up, reading all the books in my luggage. This was my fifth times to read through every single book there. When I finished, I looked at the clock hopefully. However, it was just two o'clock in the morning.
I really couldn't sleep. I stood up. Walked out of my room. I heard some strange sound came from the common room.
'No, this is not good enough.'
'But we've got nothing more than these.'
There was a sharp sound coming from the fireplace as I stepped in.
'Who's there?' Fred asked cautiously.
'Fred, can't you just use your brain? Who would study over night? Come on, Hermione,' George said.
I frowned. I walked near them. There was a mess on the floor. A lot of different kind of eerie things were on the mat. They sat around them, holding their wands.
'How do you know it's me?' I asked.
'I smell your scent,' George said with a twisted smile. Fred smirked.
'And what are you two doing here? You should be on your bed!' I accused them.
'So, what are you doing, prefect?' Fred asked.
'I heard you,' I said before I thought twice. This was obviously not persuasive enough.
'See, my dearest princess heard me,' George said, round my shoulder with his warm arm.
'Excuse me, I want to vomit,' Fred said as he stalked away.
We were alone in the common room. It was a very tense moment to me. I really couldn't breath whenever he was.
'Are you interested in our products?' he asked gently.
'No,' I said, pretended to be firm.
'Why are you blushing? Do you feel hot?'
I touched my cheek. It was burning my palm.
'Nothing, it's nothing......' I hadn't finished, then he kissed on my cheek.
I ran back to my room without looking through his eyes.
Once again, I'm too CLEVER.
I really couldn't sleep. I stood up. Walked out of my room. I heard some strange sound came from the common room.
'No, this is not good enough.'
'But we've got nothing more than these.'
There was a sharp sound coming from the fireplace as I stepped in.
'Who's there?' Fred asked cautiously.
'Fred, can't you just use your brain? Who would study over night? Come on, Hermione,' George said.
I frowned. I walked near them. There was a mess on the floor. A lot of different kind of eerie things were on the mat. They sat around them, holding their wands.
'How do you know it's me?' I asked.
'I smell your scent,' George said with a twisted smile. Fred smirked.
'And what are you two doing here? You should be on your bed!' I accused them.
'So, what are you doing, prefect?' Fred asked.
'I heard you,' I said before I thought twice. This was obviously not persuasive enough.
'See, my dearest princess heard me,' George said, round my shoulder with his warm arm.
'Excuse me, I want to vomit,' Fred said as he stalked away.
We were alone in the common room. It was a very tense moment to me. I really couldn't breath whenever he was.
'Are you interested in our products?' he asked gently.
'No,' I said, pretended to be firm.
'Why are you blushing? Do you feel hot?'
I touched my cheek. It was burning my palm.
'Nothing, it's nothing......' I hadn't finished, then he kissed on my cheek.
I ran back to my room without looking through his eyes.
Once again, I'm too CLEVER.
這是討論串底端！何不幫忙讓這串魔法煙綿延下去呢？
